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Writer's pictureKristin Kowalski Ferragut

In Three Turns with "The Offing"

Updated: Nov 30

I’ve turned/returned to The Offing, Alison Palmer’s fourth poetry collection, over the past few weeks (Broadstone Books, 2024). I find new insight, beauty, and heartbreak at each turn. This post — my response.



In Three Turns with The Offing*



I read, Not everything is better in the light*,

and pray, Please God, let something be better in the light.

I set down thorn words, broken wire, pinhole-

by-star-in-midnight-sky words and wait.


After anger burns me down and I sweep up 

bitters and regrets;

After wishes squeeze through windowsill cracks to grow

lungs and inhabit selves outside of me;

After it becomes clear the hope I dug into earth beneath the pine that says,

I too want to shed my leaves, was buried not planted;

After rest,


I pick up feather-words, read, Distance has been an emergency 

where tenderness never existed.*

If trust can’t be counted between lovers, between friends, in slant

words I find lucidity that feels like tenderness, like honesty.



The Offing, poems by Alison Palmer (Broadstone Books, 2024)

*"Arrogance of Days"

*"On Separating (with You)"



I am not always able to access the pain, grief, longing, and beauty in these poems from a place of love, but when I do, as I do now, little compares with their gorgeous essence, their shimmer, the elemental captured in having known a Love.


There are 30 pieces in The Offing, of which I have several favorites. Here’s one: 



In the Middle of Kissing You, Trees Catch Fire



Who command the trees burn so quickly

we fail to see them? I don’t need the flames’ reflection


in your golden eyes, but I want a bit of madness. Part of this night


doesn’t make sense. What good are thousands of stars

if they fail to illuminate a single wish?


What kind of sky is that? I’ve no grasp on mornings

you decide to wake alone. I whisper,


I want your skin on mine, in such a way

you don’t feel it at all. I’ll send my distress signals


before day-break; we’re here, kissing autumnally.







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